My visual poem is about enjoying life. I wanted to tell people to enjoy life and do things that make you happy. For my visuals, I used a lot of pictures but they still show feeling. In most of my pictures you'll see someone laughing or smiling. You can really see that they're enjoying life.
To make the mood of my poem a little more exciting, I added an effect called Ken Burns. This is a type of panning and zooming effect used on videos. So for most f my pictures I zoomed in on someone laughing or smiling to show that they are enjoying life. I think the ken burns helped show what I was trying to show in my pictures.
I am kind of satisfied with my results. I definitely could have made it better by using more videos and less pictures. It was kind of difficult for me to do this poem though because of how short it is, so the time for videos or pictures was very limited. I think next time I could think out a better way to show happiness and fun instead of all pictures.
I really liked how your music matched your poem pretty well. Maybe next time you could've gotten more video instead of the pictures. Nice poem, great message!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Lilio! I love your B-roll. You could of lowered the volume on the background music. Other than that i really like your poem!
ReplyDeleteHiya Lilio! I really liked your vareity of B-Roll because it really relates to your video and decripted a lot of emotion. One I thing I suggest is to turn down the volume in your music because it was very hard to hear your actual voice. Either way, I really like your theme of your poem and your rhyming scheme was spot on.
ReplyDeleteI really like your topic.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time turn down the music in the background it was a little loud.
Great job though.
The effects that you added made it really nice. Some clips and shots were a little out of focus. Your rhyme scheme was done very well.
ReplyDeleteThe music gives the poem a lot of feeling.
ReplyDeleteThere were a few blurry shots.
A lot of b-roll.
I really liked your shots and your music it really matches, maybe adjust music volume and put more videos rather than just pictures, I really liked your script, well said :D.
ReplyDeleteThe photos you used matched your poem. It was hard to understand your voiceover. Nice overall visual poem.
ReplyDeleteNice B-roll. There was a lot of pictures and sometimes thats not a good thing. Good job on the voiceover.
ReplyDeleteGreat pictures.
ReplyDeleteSome B-roll went by fast.
Great music.
- I like how you filmed outside of school.
ReplyDelete- Maybe you could've used more videos rather than pictures.
- I also liked how you added effects to your pictures.
I like the backround music.
ReplyDeleteA lot of the B-Roll was low-quality pictures, you could've improved with high-quality video, and the ending was rather sudden.
Your poem was pretty good.
The photos you used matched your poem. Some of the photos you took were out of focus, you could've used other photos that were in focus. I liked how you did the three way split screen for one of your clips.
ReplyDeleteI liked you're Voice over. It would be better if there was more video .voice over is clear.
ReplyDeleteI like the good use of matching pictures.
ReplyDeleteThere could've been more actual B-Roll.
Good music that matched.
I really liked how you had a lot of pictures that related to your poem.
ReplyDeleteI think your background music was a little too loud, makes it a little hard to hear your voiceover.
I also liked the different effects you put into your visual poem!
Hi Lilio, nice visual poem. I really like how clear your voice is and how there is no background noises. One thing you can improve is to put more video clips, and less photos. Overall, your visual poem was really great.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the b-role... Especially because I was in it:)
ReplyDeleteThe music could have been a little bit quieter.
You had really good effects like the ken burns effect. I loved it!
Nice rhyme scheme, your poem flowed very well. One thing that could be improved is your B-Roll. Majority of it was pictures, and it could be improved with more applicable video clips every now and then, or adding the Kens Burns effect.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was pretty good. I like the effect you did with the dancing
ReplyDeleteMore B-Roll instead of pictures would be nice
You had a nice rhyme scheme
Nice job Lilio! The B-Roll matched the video very well!
ReplyDeleteThere could be a audio adjust in the music; it was hard to hear the poem.
The rhyme scheme was awesome in your poem!
Great job!
I really liked your video! It had a good rhythm to it.
ReplyDeleteI think you could have lowered the volume a little so you could hear your voice better.
The b-roll matched well and looked cool.
like your b-roll and all your transitions also all the pictures
ReplyDeleteIf i made the video i would put more video and make the voice more clear
over all it was a good video
1.) I really liked the meaning in your poem and the various b-roll pictures; they went along great with what you were saying.
ReplyDelete2.) There were a couple of shots that were quick and a little blurry.
3.) You did a great job! I really liked how you added ken-burns on all of your pictures to make it intriguing!
Love your b-roll its funny cute and totally relatable. Maybe next time put more videos instead of pictures. Your audio was great not to soft not to loud just right. Great job!
ReplyDelete- I liked your b-roll and how you used multiple different shots.
ReplyDelete- I think that there was too much pictures and you could've got more shots.
- I really liked the music that you used with your poem.
The music matched with your poem, maybe use more videos than pictures, overall your poem was really good
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